Tuesday, January 29, 2013

Fictional limits in BDSM

Hello everyone,

I guest posted a blog at Elise Hepner's page. Intended to be a discussion starter about the use of limits in BDSM fiction. I'll leave a link to it and if anyone feels like stopping by, please do. Thanks! I'll post soon another brief excerpt from Serving Her and I still plan to post a series of brief excerpts from Protege Mistress, a story of unrequited love requited. Here's the link to the post at Elise Hepner's site:

http://celise91writer.blogspot.com/2013/01/new-writers-week-gregory-allen.html?zx=7f3de3c341810eba

Sunday, January 20, 2013

Serving Her: Lazy Sunday excerpt

A snippet of Alex and Kimberly enjoying a relaxing Sunday afternoon in Serving Her

“I need to have you fetch me something and then kiss my feet while I enjoy it, but I can’t think of what I want.”

            “Orange pop?” Alex spoke into the wall.

            “Do we have orange pop?”

            “I bought some yesterday.”

            “Orange pop sounds good.”

            Alex kept his nose pressed to the wall, up on his toes. “Would you like it, now?”

            “Yes.”

            Alex let his heels touch the carpet and immediate relief spread up his legs. He pulled his face back, releasing his nose from contact with the wall. He took a couple of uneasy steps as the strain and fatigue in his leg muscles made him not trust trying to walk. Feeling returned, and he walked into the kitchen. He filled a glass with ice and poured a can of orange pop in, slowly letting it fill in from the side to minimize the lost fizz. The head of his cock peeked over the countertop. Nothing like being naked in a kitchen to make him feel humiliated and nothing like feeling humiliated to bring rigidity to his wounded member, reminding him how naked he was in a kitchen. And on into perpetuity.

            He brought Kimberly’s drink in held high above his erection. He knelt at her feet with the drink held up, and she took it from him and sipped. She crossed her legs and lifted her raised foot up under his chin. “Don’t my toes look pretty?”

            Alex nodded as he drew in breath with his mouth closed, enjoying the scent of her foot. He waited patiently for the kiss he yearned to give. “Yes, Ma’am.”

            “You were punished for your mistakes, but for your first time, you didn’t do too poorly. I suppose you’re due for a reward. Lie down.” Kimberly brought her heels up to the couch’s edge.

            Alex rolled over and lay parallel with the couch. He scooted up till his face was where Kimberly directed, just under her feet hanging over. When he was still, she slowly dropped them down. They lightly kicked in the air inches above him, then touched, a heel on his chin and the other on his cheekbone. Both went flat, the ball of one foot pressing against his forehead, the other settling next to his nose. His mouth covered by her arch. Kimberly peeked down at him, smiling. He could only see her around her left foot which covered the inside halves of his eyes and obscured his vision. She sipped from her glass of orange pop. She tapped the ball of her foot against his lips, and Alex kissed. She grabbed his bottom lip with her dexterous toes and tugged his mouth open. She popped her big toe in. Alex closed his lips around it and moaned as Kimberly dipped it in and out. She pulled it all the way out and slowly passed her foot across his mouth, letting Alex place passionate kisses along the length to her heel. She rested that foot on his chest and ran her left foot over his mouth the same way, letting him cover it with more passionate kisses. Alex’s eyes drooped closed, opened, and drooped closed again, as he moaned and kissed.    

Kimberly giggled. “You look like you’re really getting to kiss me.”

            “I am really getting to kiss you.”

            “Aww, that was cute. Say that again.”

            As he started to, she popped her foot into his mouth, muffling his words. She reached for the remote control on the side table and turned on the TV. “Let me find one of my Tivo’ed shows to watch while you enjoy my feet.”